Render Book(Stromberg)

Pibuz · Post by **Pibuz** » Mon May 04, 2009 7:47 pm

Ok...FIIIINE.
You're good with alpha maps and stuff. We got your point. Now STOP.

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good work man: these look really great

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Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Tue May 05, 2009 2:12 am

Pibuz: Thanks, that realy means alot from a interior master as you

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Tue May 05, 2009 10:18 am

Well i'm going to call this final, the images will be posted in the final forum aswell

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Borgleader · Post by **Borgleader** » Tue May 05, 2009 12:00 pm

The wheel metal material looks really odd. I think the bars should be spaced out evenly and...the center circle looks a bit weird... look some up on google?

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Tue May 05, 2009 12:13 pm

It's ugly, thats what it is XD
I just had that idea that there should be a cycle wheel there, and i can see now that it was a realy bad idea, and it does have poor modeling

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Wed May 06, 2009 5:19 am

Well i removed that horrible wheel

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Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sat May 09, 2009 1:13 pm

One new wip from me, tell me what you think

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Borgleader · Post by **Borgleader** » Sat May 09, 2009 1:16 pm

I think the railings are oversized. Especially the top part. Stairs look narrow.

CTZn · Post by **CTZn** » Sat May 09, 2009 3:29 pm

I thought I stopped LSD

Just seconding borgleader here

handsomedave · Post by **handsomedave** » Sun May 10, 2009 12:20 am

Looks like the rise on the steps varies too. Is it intentional?

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sun May 10, 2009 12:50 am

Yeah, there is alot wrong with this render

Will see if i can get something good out of it or just trash it.

handsomedave: Can you please specify what you mean, my english is not top notch

Update:

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Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sun May 10, 2009 1:39 am

Well i like trying to make it look lilike a picture taken with flash, just for fun

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CTZn · Post by **CTZn** » Sun May 10, 2009 4:54 am

Please don't trash it stromberg, these images have already more than a great potential !

Handsomdave must be refering to the unevenness in steps height, this is more than unusual I rekon.

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sun May 10, 2009 5:09 am

Thanks, CTZn

I have changed that now, any ideas for objects i can place in my scene or anything?
As i need critics on this

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sun May 10, 2009 7:46 am

Here is a new scene i'm working on

As i'm bad at doing interiors and exteriors i keep praticing on it, so bare with me and my ugly images

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