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[8bstudio]

Hi!
Here my 4 render (v.0.5):
time 16h with hdri


... more atmosphere, maybe! ... but how???
What do you think about?

Here another version with different hdri, v.0.5 and about 16h too.


I think they're too clean!

[manitwo]

hi 8bstudio

nice
You could make your picture way better if you pick out another detail.
At the moment in each corner of your pic is an object, give your pic a
little space to breath.
Also they are all nearly at the same distance level - maybe put an object
closer to the camera
It's hard for me to explain in english exactly what i mean
so its easier to give you links

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Composition_(visual_arts)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Golden_cut

The links are not too informative but then you hopefully know what i'm talking about
But of course it's your picture - you're the master

[8bstudio]

Thanks MANITWO, very interesting!!

I think my images are too clean because the light is much diffuse, no shade zone and maybe hdri that I used are with white light.
In few hours I'll post another pic with another hdri....
We will see!!
Ciao.

[8bstudio]

Hi to all!

My last test with v0.6T5... I think that v0.6T5 is perfect...
Now it shall be very good SSS and alpha map.
Niiiiickkkkkkkkk!!!! Pleaseeeee!!!