First Interior Scene, good or bad?

sciman · Post by **sciman** » Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:23 am

Hi,

Here is my first try at an interior scene in indigo. Anything obviously wrong or out of place in it? (I do need to add chairs though)

Behrendt · Post by **Behrendt** » Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:42 am

I think you made a nice start with Indigo but you definitely have to improve your modelling skills and your feeling for a good scene. You'll never find a setting like you rendered it. There are many wrong scales and so on! Look for reference images and for measures of objects you want to model.

mrCarnivore · Post by **mrCarnivore** » Fri Aug 24, 2007 1:46 am

Not bad for a first scene.

You should have posted that render in the "work in progress" thread, though.

zsouthboy · Post by **zsouthboy** » Fri Aug 24, 2007 2:36 am

Does anyone else have a huge crush on Emma Watson?

Just me then?

Kram1032 · Post by **Kram1032** » Fri Aug 24, 2007 4:14 am

nice 1st

look at the forks and the knifes

they're quite misshaped.

you need to overwork your grass outdoor: it's not dense enough

and you either have to lower the brightness of the TV or double tonemap the scene....

the TV hangs pretty high / the table and the window are too low (in 2nd case, the table also is too small) and needs boxes ^^

else, I'd say, it should be quite fine

sciman · Post by **sciman** » Fri Aug 24, 2007 11:17 am

Ok, Thanks everyone.

deltaepsylon · Post by **deltaepsylon** » Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:46 pm

zsouthboy wrote:Does anyone else have a huge crush on Emma Watson?

Just me then?

well.... the movie hermione is ...not good

the real emma watson is.... above average

jk lol, id say 7/10

and ive seen 10's at my school

eman7613 · Post by **eman7613** » Fri Aug 24, 2007 1:00 pm

LIke it so far, jsut two metnions.

1.) the outisde needs a tree or something visable. like a lawn chair.

2.) remove the food place that is closest TV, no one has eyes back there

mrCarnivore · Post by **mrCarnivore** » Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:59 pm

Is that really a window? I thought it was just a photograph of a green lawn hanging on the wall...

If it IS a window, you should make the outside brighter. Otherwise it's ok.

Just have to make the wineglasses bigger.

StompinTom · Post by **StompinTom** » Sat Aug 25, 2007 1:47 am

change the camera angle. the lighting is also very fruity. the scene doesnt have a focal point as of yet, try to arrange the table/tv/camera in a different way to get a nice composition.

sciman · Post by **sciman** » Wed Sep 12, 2007 1:39 pm

Ok, thanks for the suggestions, I'll try changing some stuff, and post a new image. It may not be for a while though, with school starting and whatnot.

First Interior Scene, good or bad?

First Interior Scene, good or bad?

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