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CJD2
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first test

Post by CJD2 » Thu Jan 24, 2008 8:41 am

:D I´m very happy with INDIGO!!!! :D (Sorry , I dont speak english :oops: ).
http://www.savefile.com/files/1336075
http://www.savefile.com/files/1336076

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Post by Kram1032 » Thu Jan 24, 2008 8:46 am

Please could you either use a host which actually shows images or directly post your images with the attach option? I don't really want to DL stuff, I don't know ;)

Well, anyway: Don't worry about your English and I'm glad, you like Indigo ;) Welcome!

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Post by CJD2 » Thu Jan 24, 2008 9:13 am

:oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: Sorry Kram .... .
My first try :)
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Post by CJD2 » Thu Jan 24, 2008 9:15 am

Work perfectily , now , the second image :D
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Post by CJD2 » Thu Jan 24, 2008 9:16 am

All o.k. , THANK KRAM!!!! :D

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Post by Kram1032 » Thu Jan 24, 2008 9:40 am

You're welcome ;)

First hint: Indigo doesn't like to smooth sharp edges. Look at your dustbin: It's full of normalsmoothing errors.
This happens, when it doesn't have a dense enough mesh ;)
You should subsurf it a few times...

2nd: The pipe underneath the basin: I think, there, you forgot to smooth the normals...

Your lampshade seems to have both issues: It's unsmoothed and it's too low poly. Except, it's supposed to be faceted...

Add an edgesplit modifier to your vase, so that the black ring on the top goes away.

This one already is *slightly* advanced: You should bevel all your edges... hard edges like those, you use, are quite unusual and usually add something very rough and uncomfortable to the appearance of things.

For a beginner image, this one already is great ;) All those mistakes are typical for beginners. Don't worry :)

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Post by Whaat » Thu Jan 24, 2008 10:41 am

Kram1032 wrote:You're welcome ;)

First hint: Indigo doesn't like to smooth sharp edges. Look at your dustbin: It's full of normalsmoothing errors.
This happens, when it doesn't have a dense enough mesh ;)
You should subsurf it a few times...

2nd: The pipe underneath the basin: I think, there, you forgot to smooth the normals...

Your lampshade seems to have both issues: It's unsmoothed and it's too low poly. Except, it's supposed to be faceted...

Add an edgesplit modifier to your vase, so that the black ring on the top goes away.

This one already is *slightly* advanced: You should bevel all your edges... hard edges like those, you use, are quite unusual and usually add something very rough and uncomfortable to the appearance of things.

For a beginner image, this one already is great ;) All those mistakes are typical for beginners. Don't worry :)
Looks like SU to me! Nice first image! We're all waiting for some proper mesh smoothing and beveling tools in SU7. Let's hope we get it. That way, we can finally have renders to compete with all these Blenderheads! :P

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Post by CJD2 » Thu Jan 24, 2008 11:26 am

Thank Kram for the welcome :D . :D
Its true , I need inprove the smoothing :( , in my next job I will try :) :) .
Thank Whaat!!!! :D , I use sket and blender , sket for the fast modeled , after made all in blender , texturing , camera etc... . I receive too much files in DWG format , from the arquitectures , therefore sket is very good choice but the final touche...Blender of course , the great soft and...FREEEE!!!(like INDIGO , the great soft too!!!).
Bye.
Carlos

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Post by CoolColJ » Thu Jan 24, 2008 8:19 pm

The overall lighting looks really realistic to me :)

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Post by CJD2 » Thu Jan 24, 2008 10:35 pm

Thank CoolColJ!!!! :D :D :D , that was the target , objetive , goal , overall lighting and materials(Sorry my english , I´m from Argentine , I speak spanish :oops: :oops: :oops: ).

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Post by Olis » Fri Jan 25, 2008 1:37 am

Your english is fine. Nice images!

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Post by CJD2 » Fri Jan 25, 2008 3:11 am

Thank Olis , thank you very much!!!!! :D :D

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