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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:21 pm

Well 2 more renders.
They where rendered on my laptop, and it's realy slow so i cant afford anything "fun" rendering with it :lol:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by SATtva_ » Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:27 am

Wow, the first one is really cool! How did you made it? :)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:34 am

Thanks, glad you liked it :)
I used the Atom Array tool, what it does is make wirefram mesh with a tube thingy, dont quite know how to explain it, but a picture explains more than a 1000 words :wink:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:18 am

Today, i have been playing with my renders in photoshop.
And i came up with a very simple drawing effect, but i think it looks very good :)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Borgleader » Sat Apr 18, 2009 7:58 am

Stromberg wrote:Thanks, glad you liked it :)
I used the Atom Array tool, what it does is make wirefram mesh with a tube thingy, dont quite know how to explain it, but a picture explains more than a 1000 words :wink:
Its from your video tutorial inst it? Where dyu get the plant for the second one?
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:57 am

Borgleader wrote: Its from your video tutorial inst it? Where dyu get the plant for the second one?
Yepp, alotugh i made the tutorial after i did that image :)
And for the plant, it was just me testing the ivy generator and if i get leafs to look "good" in indigo.

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:01 am

One more time rendering on my laptop since i was at a friend.
The model is a 3D scan made by jotero i think.

Both of these rendered for 10 min, as my laptop gets realy slow(er) when rendering :lol:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Mon Apr 20, 2009 5:30 pm

Whohooo... triple post. Always wanted todo that, just never had a good reason to now :lol:
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stur » Tue Apr 21, 2009 8:31 am

Nice modeling but i see some Phong artifacts near holes. You should add an EdgeSplit modifier (if modeled in Blender)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by PureSpider » Tue Apr 21, 2009 10:04 am

Modelled in C4D... break your phong shading dude! :lol:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Tue Apr 21, 2009 10:08 am

I know the phong shading artifacts are there.
But my laptop is realy slow, and only reason doing this is to have a render going overnight while i dont use it :lol:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by CTZn » Tue Apr 21, 2009 4:33 pm

Nice models, good skills :) Do you use booleans a lot or not ?

Smoothing issues are related with the geometry, not with materials.
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Tue Apr 21, 2009 5:30 pm

Thanks.

For most of the D-LINK model there is no used booleans exept for the text, but there is some bad geometry some places. So i try and use them as little as possible.

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There is alot of improvment needed on this :lol:
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by OnoSendai » Tue Apr 21, 2009 5:36 pm

Very funny :)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by suvakas » Tue Apr 21, 2009 8:46 pm

lol :D
Great idea !

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