last image is very nice and nicely structured, and I just love your lamp, at least from this angle
And I do agree that from time to time you are jumping too fast, your images would benefit a lot by you adjusting some more details... but as I understand this topic is more like "works in progress".
But I'd love to see a finished version of your cake, for example on the table in front of the window where you put a vase somewhere at the beginning of your book...

