Render Book(Stromberg)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Polinalkrimizei » Sat Jun 13, 2009 8:10 am

Nice one Stromberg! Your images don't suck at all, it's always nice to visit your render book. Your first "room scenes" didn't convince me though, it just looked like a random room from a random angle with random objects randomly placed :wink:
last image is very nice and nicely structured, and I just love your lamp, at least from this angle :)
And I do agree that from time to time you are jumping too fast, your images would benefit a lot by you adjusting some more details... but as I understand this topic is more like "works in progress".
But I'd love to see a finished version of your cake, for example on the table in front of the window where you put a vase somewhere at the beginning of your book...

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sat Jun 13, 2009 8:48 am

Polinalkrimizei: Thanks :)
Talking about the randomness of some of my interior images, the last one with the leather looking couch, i feel kinda cheated, cause i mostly dont have the currage to make my own designs, so i copied a image i found in a interior magazine :P
The last one is designed by me tough, glad that you like the lamp, i was lucky to find a good reference photo of it :)
And yeah, i am a fast moving guy, i need to change what i work on or i would get mad :lol:
I'm actualy trying to do a render of the chocolate cake as you described, requests like that is the best :D

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sat Jun 13, 2009 11:35 am

The cake turned out bad :P
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by PureSpider » Sat Jun 13, 2009 11:42 am

The only bad thing about that cake is that I can't get a piece of it :evil:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Polinalkrimizei » Sat Jun 13, 2009 11:56 am

Wow you're fast on dealing with requests! Nice! Do you have a daylight picture with something outside the window? cause chocolate cake reminds me of children's birthday and that takes place ideally in the summer in the sun.
and I'm not sure, cause I don't have such a big piece of chocolate at hand, but maybe the exponent of the cake is too high? :?:

I like the new black colour better and the radio fits perfectly.

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sat Jun 13, 2009 1:00 pm

Thanks both of you :)
I do have the daytime version, the problem is that the light is from behind so the cake get's all black since there is not that much sss on it. I might take a look at the exponent :)

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sat Jun 13, 2009 8:05 pm

Layer blending :)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by WytRaven » Sat Jun 13, 2009 10:09 pm

That's a really nice scene stromberg. Good work :)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by fused » Sat Jun 13, 2009 10:19 pm

nice. care to share the leather material on the chair?

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by PureSpider » Sat Jun 13, 2009 10:39 pm

+1 for leather mat share :mrgreen:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun Jun 14, 2009 4:55 am

Thanks, everyone :)
Fused, requested another floor material, any idea what i could be?

The leater material, is bbb's worn brown leather material with a diffrent color and a ior of 2, i was going to use another kind of texture but it wasnt supported by indigo :wink:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun Jun 14, 2009 5:36 am

Floor test.
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:47 am

Well just to tell you, i'm going to Riga in Latvia for a week tomorrow, going to be great!
Realy cheap there.... so that means hangover trip :D
You are properly going to miss me so much.... right? :wink:

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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by Stromberg » Sun Jun 21, 2009 3:42 am

Back from Riga, and getting closer and closer to finnish this scene :)
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Re: Render Book(Stromberg)

Post by fused » Sun Jun 21, 2009 6:21 am

wb Stromberg!
Hope you had a nice trip.

I like the version with the righ lamp the most, its great. i find the aspect ratio a little strange...

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