A kitchen scene

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by CTZn » Tue Feb 09, 2010 1:51 am

Good job suvakas !

Yes, the scene looks perfect to test galinette's proc tiles :)
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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by Polinalkrimizei » Tue Feb 09, 2010 2:56 am

Nice, refreshing work! Good to see a "real" kitchen and not another stylish, perfect one out of the catalog :wink:
And it does look pretty damn real, especially the images that seem to be taken with a flash.
The only thing that doesn't convince me though is the kitchen towel, it looks like a cgi-towel attached to a real scene.
I like the gas flames , and it's good to see some progress in this scene finally!

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by suvakas » Tue Feb 09, 2010 6:37 pm

galinette wrote:Could you try my white ceramic tile material? I've never seen it in a real scene.
The procedural tile misalignment may add some realism, and you can customize the tile & plaster colors to whatever you like

Etienne
Ok, I did one render with your tile material. I didn't modify it. This is "White Ceramic - Procedural/Bump" material taken directly from the database.
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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by galinette » Tue Feb 09, 2010 10:39 pm

Thanks!

I'd say that the exponent looks too high. The misalignment works well! Maybe it's even too misaligned.

It would need also some UV remapping

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by Soup » Wed Feb 10, 2010 10:08 am

there's something unreal about that cloth on the right-hand side. It's... too sharp. Maybe make it a little diffuse transmitter or something :)

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by CTZn » Thu Feb 11, 2010 7:09 am

Yes, the cloth seems to pump to much light (at least posing looks ok to me).

I'd reduce slightly the tile size, misalignement is nice but they come too close and that breaks readibility too much.

edit: now, a flash setup is about the worst thing to evaluate bump mapping :lol: ;)
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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by suvakas » Thu Feb 11, 2010 7:13 am

I kind of like the cloth :D .
But yeah, it was done in a few minutes to fill that empty wall there.

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by suvakas » Thu Feb 11, 2010 9:39 am

Very short sun and camera animation:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4VsIhNUUzr0

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Re: A kitchen scene

Post by OnoSendai » Thu Feb 11, 2010 10:31 am

Nice video!

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