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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by neo0. » Mon Jan 11, 2010 7:12 pm

Bowling :)
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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by fused » Mon Jan 11, 2010 7:18 pm

nice one, Neo.

But a few things arent right:

* pins are too lage and too fat
* the parkett is usually not across the lane but in the direction of the lane (if u understand what i mean, hard to explain :) )
* the parkett shouldnt have any bump, you wouldnt really want a bumpy bowlng lane. they are usually even and ploished (higher ior, higher exponent :) )
* i think bowling lanes arent flat, but maybe im wrong. iirc thet have a little falloff on the side.

keep it up!

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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by Doug Armand » Mon Jan 11, 2010 7:26 pm

one of the best renders I've seen you do Neo.

Good use of DoF and camera angle/focal length

Agree with all of Fused' comments and I also would say subdivide the pins more - looking a bit chunky around the top.

Also the banding around the pin heads - part of the texture map?
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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by pixie » Mon Jan 11, 2010 11:17 pm

Pins seems to be floating too...

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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by Zom-B » Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:13 pm

Hey guys...
here are the last two images from me:

This here is my image for the latest Lighning Chalange of Jeremy Birn.
Modeling by David Vacek, texturing, lighting, rendering etc. by me:
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This is a Indigo version of a free 3D scene over at oyonale.com
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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by OnoSendai » Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:17 pm

Nice ones Zom-B!
Does the first image use real Indigo participating media?

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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by Zom-B » Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:31 pm

OnoSendai wrote:Nice ones Zom-B!
Does the first image use real Indigo participating media?
Thanks Ono :)
Yes, the first one hast a SSS box in the room to simulate some dust.
rendered for ages to become noisefree ^^
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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by Meelis » Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:07 pm

:shock: :shock: :shock:
Holy something, unbelievable how something amazing the 1st image looks.
Really really good Zom-B

If u look the black flat sheet details WOW just amazing.

That one will sell Indigo really good.
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EDIT
bad words removed. Sorry. :)
Reminds me sandwich eating :D
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dC_U7Uxer6w
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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by Doug Armand » Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:14 pm

Whilst I agree with your sentiments Meelis please watch your language :evil: - its a public forum after all
You have been warned :!: :shock:

walks off - casually throwing his weight around :wink:

edit: LOL thanks for changing that Meelis.
You could have also just changed some characters in the words as in 'that is f*&king amazing'. That would be sort of acceptable :mrgreen:
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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by Zom-B » Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:26 pm

Doug Armand wrote:Whilst I agree with your sentiments Zom-B please watch your language :evil:
I think you have the wrong guy Doug :roll:


Meelis wrote:If u look the black flat sheet details WOW just amazing.
The modeling was done by David Vacek , so no credit for me with this...
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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by Doug Armand » Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:37 pm

Zom-B wrote:
Doug Armand wrote:Whilst I agree with your sentiments Zom-B please watch your language :evil:
I think you have the wrong guy Doug :roll:


Meelis wrote:If u look the black flat sheet details WOW just amazing.
The modeling was done by David Vacek , so no credit for me with this...
LOL yeah well you watch it too! :wink:
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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by Stinkie » Thu Jan 14, 2010 12:17 am

You tell 'em, Doug! :lol:

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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by fused » Thu Jan 14, 2010 9:55 am

:lol:


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haha, i guess i have to fear being told off for spamming now? :D

what could i do?.... oh gof, whatcould i do?


erm....






nice work Zom-B!

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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by Soup » Thu Jan 14, 2010 11:23 am

That room is beautiful Zom-b, make sure you put it in the gallery!
(I think the best of Indigo needs an update ;) )

The ladybug's shell looks too flat, aren't they shinier than that?
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Re: Simple Renderings Thread

Post by neo0. » Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:21 pm

I decided to create my own cornell box.. Tried out a wide variety of responce functions just for fun.. :)
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