Render Book(Stromberg)

psor · Post by **psor** » Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:32 pm

Doug Armand wrote: Mmmm Zbrush. Keep seeing nice stuff done with that. May have to check it out

Do that, it's awesome. First clear your mind, cause it's interface can be disturbing in the
first hours.

edit: baahh, Stromberg beat me to it!

take care
psor

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:37 pm

Hehe, you are right tough, and be aware of buttons in zbrush they can destroy everything...

There is buttons for deleting your uv maps, and many other thing including deleting your model... and when you click one of those buttons do you think you will get a "oops, sure you want to delete you uv's/model?" Nope that dosnt happend zbrush thinks "Hell yeah, i'l delete it.. i dont care if you presses the button by accident, il just delete it"

Ah.. good to finaly get that out of the system

Stur · Post by **Stur** » Fri Sep 18, 2009 1:31 am

small crit : I think the arm is too small, OR, the chest is too long (or both

). Look at the elbow, it looks to high to me.

But it's a nice modeling anyway, I couldn't do so nice myself

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sat Sep 19, 2009 8:14 am

Stur: Thanks

And there is alot of mistakes with this model, as i said i am still learning this

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sat Sep 26, 2009 1:59 am

2 more

Also in the finished renders forum

: SunMLT.jpg (113.99 KiB) Viewed 4063 times

: With_Lights.jpg (94.47 KiB) Viewed 4061 times

psor · Post by **psor** » Sat Sep 26, 2009 2:11 am

Honestly I'm no fan of it, but I'm very picky sometimes and taste differs.

Anyway a suggestion. Collect your images in the first post instead of
spreading them through your thread. It's hard to keep track of them.

take care
psor

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sat Sep 26, 2009 2:29 am

No problem realy, taste differs

I doubt i will collect all in the first post, i like it this way

But of course if i get "many" complaints about it i might do that.

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:32 am

Please give critics on this one, as i am far from happy with it

Godzilla · Post by **Godzilla** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:51 am

Amazing skin material on the previous page, any chance of it getting in the database?

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 9:23 am

Again i would love to get critics on the interior.

Godzilla: I can of course share it later

Not a realy good shader tough, mostly luck

Borgleader · Post by **Borgleader** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:43 pm

Tabletop is waaayy too thick, same for the wood plank supporting the TV, but that's it the rest is nice

Doug Armand · Post by **Doug Armand** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:24 pm

Stromberg - nice interior. My crits are that it is just too clean. This makes it look too CGI. Try a bit of mess

Make that back wall have a little variation - like very very slight smudging

suvakas · Post by **suvakas** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 6:53 pm

For me it's the TV that brings it down. TV is where my eyes focus and it doesn't look real enough. And I'm not sure if the proportions are correct. That TV table seems kind of huge.
Also there is a shadow inside the left lamp even when it is on? You could use a diffuse transmitter material for the lamp shade and place an emitter inside it. Should look way more real like that.

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 10:24 pm

Thanks everyone, i will work on those critics

The lamps does use diffuse transmitter and has a emitter inside, dont know why the shadows is there tough

Going to try and fix the tv and model soime more stuff in it.

Stur · Post by **Stur** » Tue Oct 13, 2009 6:50 am

Wooden floors have baseboards

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