First render

mwesch · Post by **mwesch** » Mon Sep 14, 2009 9:00 am

Right here's is my last test render before properly going all out in the rendering because honestly i dunno how to make it any better, the scene just has realism limitations

. Hope you like

edit: The window panes seem to be blurred out, maybe because of the amount of exposure i dunno.

Thanks for all your advice

Chris

Whaat · Post by **Whaat** » Mon Sep 14, 2009 3:13 pm

This is not a bad scene but if you want some more suggestions on how to make it more realistic, here are mine:
* Every little detail should be modeled with accurate scale. The stool by the island looks too high and the chair in the background looks too small. The lower cabinets seem too wide especially compared to the fridge. Look at your fridge. Most fridges come out further than the base cabinet. Base cabinets are about 24" width. Yours seem wider but that might be due to the ....
* Very wide angle lens. The field of view seems so wide and it makes the room look so unrealistically long. It also makes everything seem a bit out of scale.
* Bevel your edges (especially the ones closer to the camera)
* The upper cabinets look wrong and I think this is mainly due to the fact that their is no delineation between the cabinet and the cabinet doors. You should model the doors separately and add a tiny gap between the doors and cabinet. You don't want it to look like a plain box.

Looks at this for some more ideas:
http://www.indigorenderer.com/forum/vie ... =17&t=6674

Hope to see more renders from you. This is a great start!

mwesch · Post by **mwesch** » Mon Sep 21, 2009 5:31 am

Here as update i hope i've improved a bit

Nick · Post by **Nick** » Mon Sep 21, 2009 5:40 am

Congratulation mwesch!! Good work

mwesch · Post by **mwesch** » Mon Sep 21, 2009 6:49 am

Should i let it cook for longer. Because any longer and it'll become the final render (hopefullly)

Pibuz · Post by **Pibuz** » Mon Sep 21, 2009 7:52 pm

The image is really getting better! Congratulations!
IMHO, lose the dishes stacked on the far left (they're not realistic at all) and the coca cola thingie on the drawer. Also, the spot lights under the cupboards are really huge, you could shrink them a little and they'd be cool. One last suggestion is that you put something behind the right chair, pinned up to the wood. A cloth or something would really work very good!

mwesch · Post by **mwesch** » Tue Sep 22, 2009 2:42 am

About the cupboard lights, it would be really cool to have ies lights for them, are there any websites with previews to download them?

psor · Post by **psor** » Tue Sep 22, 2009 2:54 am

@mwesch

I don't know a site that has previews of them, but here a small hint to an useful programm.
Then just go to a site like erco.com or any other light fixture manufacture and you're set.

I hope this will help you out.

take care
psor

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