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8bstudio
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by 8bstudio » Wed Dec 20, 2006 9:30 pm
Hi!
Here two version of my new interior wip. A museum at last floor.
.exr version and meshlight for spot

sun version and meshlight for spot

And later I'll add some museum interior design...
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OnoSendai

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by OnoSendai » Wed Dec 20, 2006 9:47 pm
This looks really cool, really nice feel to the images.
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CTZn
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by CTZn » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:35 am
A project for a martian colony ?

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StompinTom

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by StompinTom » Thu Dec 21, 2006 3:25 am
looks good, but lose the post&chain thing and replace it with something a bit more elegant. it looks out of place in that kind of modern-ish room. same with the benches. the concrete wall/blocks in the background and the geodesic dome suggest modern and the benches are anything but. maybe some minimalist concrete/stone benches? there just seems to be a clash of styles.
this is just a style thing so take it as you many. my two cents.
overall, nice clean render. keep it up!
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CTZn
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by CTZn » Thu Dec 21, 2006 3:53 am
And for the benches there is not enough room to stand up comfortably, and to admire the piece of art also thats a bit too close.
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8bstudio
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by 8bstudio » Fri Jan 05, 2007 5:19 am
First, hi to all and happy New Year!!!
Here last image before red your comments (thanks for those!)
Now, after vacations, I'm working again to my museum. See you soon!
P.S. Very good job Ono for SSS!
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Phil
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by Phil » Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:14 pm
Hi,
Super
The room is better according to a museum, but I prefered the light befor.
I also missed the paper on the bottom
It is really a super work!
Perhaps just a little improving on the light.
regards, Phil
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8bstudio
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by 8bstudio » Mon Jan 08, 2007 9:37 pm
Thank Phil!
Here another version! Next I'll put magazine again! Now I'm working around light!

What do you think about?
Bye to all!
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CTZn
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by CTZn » Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:47 am
For me it's too dark for a museum, or say iy's closed now ! imo you will need more than 1 light inside the room... the sky is ok

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