My first scene.

Kram1032 · Post by **Kram1032** » Sat Dec 08, 2007 10:53 pm

nice

yttrium88 · Post by **yttrium88** » Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:59 am

Well, I added this mat, but everyone I have shown it to seems to think it doesn't really fit with the room- not really what I was concerned with at the time. Anyway, I am thinking of wrapping this one up, just because I want to keep moving and maybe build a nicer/fuller room or an object next.

So I would certainly appreciate any comments that will help me better this scene in its last few stages.

Thanks,
Nathan

CTZn · Post by **CTZn** » Wed Dec 12, 2007 10:06 am

I think it's ok, it just lacks a fuller room or an object next to be reflected in

kadajawi · Post by **kadajawi** » Wed Dec 12, 2007 12:21 pm

I think it's ok, but it just doesn't seem to fit in the room... maybe keep it for another work?

BbB · Post by **BbB** » Wed Dec 12, 2007 8:10 pm

Shrink the mat and put it on the table. Would be a shame to lose it.

Kram1032 · Post by **Kram1032** » Thu Dec 13, 2007 5:49 am

and of white balance, I'd say

yttrium88 · Post by **yttrium88** » Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:43 am

Alright, so this is what it is looking like for the final render.

Any last minute suggestions are still appreciated. (will fix tonemapping in final render)

yttrium88 · Post by **yttrium88** » Tue Jan 08, 2008 10:37 am

Ok, final version is here. This is a closed scene as far as I'm concerned:

Time elapsed: 143 h, 6 s
Done 8077840000.00000 samples (7888.51563 samples per pixel)
15691.01664 samples / second (63.73073 micro-seconds / sample)

I just noticed this, but only a total, absolute, first-timer noob gives a scene a name like 'room'.

Kram1032 · Post by **Kram1032** » Tue Jan 08, 2008 11:00 am

nicely improved! Great

BbB · Post by **BbB** » Tue Jan 08, 2008 11:10 am

Well done. Nice details.

kadajawi · Post by **kadajawi** » Wed Jan 09, 2008 5:38 am

Looks as if you added some 3D balls into a photo

Except for the weird balls it is photorealistic to me. I don't see any flaw

Kram1032 · Post by **Kram1032** » Wed Jan 09, 2008 6:50 am

kadajawi wrote:Except for the weird balls it is photorealistic to me.

Even the reflection is photo realistic, but the balls aren't xD
"real reflections of unreal balls O.o"

yttrium88 · Post by **yttrium88** » Thu Jan 10, 2008 7:14 am

In retrospect, I should have bump mapped those. That might have more realistically achieved the effect I was going for.

But too late, because now I'm done fiddling with it. Time to mount another assault on this 'learning curve' thing.

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