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Post by rosario975 » Tue Oct 30, 2007 8:55 am

my first work by indigo
C&C welcome :wink: :wink:
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Post by alex22 » Tue Oct 30, 2007 9:03 am

That looks very nice already, but you should bevel some of the edges (table, lamp). Then you get will some highlights at the edges.

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Post by Zom-B » Tue Oct 30, 2007 9:12 am

A great first result

Somehow every Italian guy over here (or even over there ^^) seems to be into (professional) architectural visualization :wink:

My only advice is to let this pic render longer, and try to get a better tonemapping by using Violet.

saving the tonemapped EXR file is also an good Idea, so you can tonemap & postprozess your results via PhotoShop etc. by hand!
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Post by rosario975 » Tue Oct 30, 2007 9:20 am

thank's every one

update tonemapping :wink:
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Post by Whaat » Tue Oct 30, 2007 9:35 am

Great work!
The attention to detail is outstanding! It really makes the image. I hope we'll see more renders from you!

If all your edges were beveled, and your plant material was improved, this could almost pass for a photo. Your leaves should be some sort of blend between phong and diffuse transmitter. They look pure diffuse.

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Post by tizxx » Tue Oct 30, 2007 10:24 am

Ottimo Lavoro!
Credo che Indigo stia crescendo ogni giorno di più
malgrado non abbia ancora un material editor
e altre cose a cui siamo abituati in softwares
commerciali come Maxwell Render o Fryrender...

Bello rivederti qui...

Ciao

Tiziano
(maxwell render dot it Staff)

P.S. Tempo di render ?
PC Utilizzato?

ma com'è che nessuno mette questi dati...

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Post by Kram1032 » Tue Oct 30, 2007 10:26 am

Very interesting:
Most Italian Indigo-users seem to render interior scenes
Most do a great job and
Most write in the Italian Language Forum, which makes it the
Most used Non-English Indigo sub-forum...

amazing details and yeah, you really should bevel those edges ;)

I could really imagine to live, there :D
Great job, well done!

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Post by rosario975 » Tue Oct 30, 2007 10:33 am

ciao tiz
non ho messo i dati solo xchè nn è una immagine finale
ma adesso te li dico e ti faccio un po rimanere di stucco
questo interno è cotto per circa 5 ore su un dual core 2,4GHZ

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Post by rosario975 » Tue Oct 30, 2007 11:18 am

thank's kram :wink:

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Post by CTZn » Tue Oct 30, 2007 11:44 am

Obviously amazing :)

My crit, coz one can not easily escape them, is that different light temperature for different luminaires would have added more depth to the image. Nice work !
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Post by WytRaven » Tue Oct 30, 2007 2:37 pm

Gorgeous! 8) The only thing that bothers me is the array of square lights in the overhead. They look very fake compared to the ultra realstic feel of everything else.
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Post by Marcofly » Tue Oct 30, 2007 10:18 pm

very good, Rosario! Happy to see that you got rid of the white points.. :wink:

i agree with CTZn, using different light colours can help making it more realistic...

yes, ZomB, most of us italians work in Archviz.. And i am very happy if the thread in the language forum helps somebody..

ciao!!

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Post by Behrendt » Wed Oct 31, 2007 5:36 am

Very nice, but you should also say that not everything is modelled by you to be fair ;)

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Post by rosario975 » Wed Oct 31, 2007 5:59 am

model evermotion free very famous (famosissimo tutti lo conoscono) :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

my model room, light, material, pavement, bar, mirror, wall glass etc.... :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll:


ok????


P.S. my model is in my website
http://rosario975.spaces.live.com/

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Post by Behrendt » Wed Oct 31, 2007 7:50 am

Yeah of course, it wasn't meant acusing or somethin, as said - just to be fair ;)

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