seashore

Show off your final renders
Post Reply
3 posts • Page 1 of 1
Prof4D
Posts: 112
Joined: Mon Aug 03, 2009 9:04 am

seashore

Post by Prof4D » Wed Aug 20, 2014 9:16 am

seashore
Attachments
Prob1_RealCamera1.jpg
Top
User avatar
zeitmeister
2nd Place 100
Posts: 2010
Joined: Tue Apr 22, 2008 4:11 am
Location: Limburg/Lahn, Germany
Contact:
Contact zeitmeister

Re: seashore

Post by zeitmeister » Wed Aug 20, 2014 7:27 pm

Very cool!
You should lower the background a bit. And for me it could be a Little Bit sharper. Less DOF.


Grüsse, zeiti
Cheers, David



DAVIDGUDELIUS // 3D.PORTFOLIO
·
Indigo 4.4.15 | Indigo for C4D 4.4.13.1 | C4D R23 | Mac OS X 10.13.6 | Windows 10 Professional x64
Top
User avatar
Oscar J
1st Place Winner
Posts: 2204
Joined: Sat Mar 31, 2012 3:47 am
Location: Gothenburg, Sweden
3D Software: Blender

Re: seashore

Post by Oscar J » Fri Aug 22, 2014 10:00 am

The background's perspective is wrong. The horizon is far too high up. Otherwise nice!
Top
Post Reply
3 posts • Page 1 of 1

Return to “Finished Artwork”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 9 guests