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Prof4D
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Visualisation

Post by Prof4D » Tue May 24, 2011 7:56 pm

Here has decided to lay out a scene made in INDIGO 2.6.1, I do not know it is how much realistic. But I do not like some moments, noise. All is made with MLT with BiDir.
But with Path tracing with BiDir a floor the scene turns out with glowworms.
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zeitmeister
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Re: Visualisation

Post by zeitmeister » Wed May 25, 2011 2:16 am

Nice scene and cool colors!
A little critics: the background plate seems a little dull to me … it could get a little more exposure.

Please let it cook longer! :D
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Re: Visualisation

Post by StompinTom » Wed May 25, 2011 3:17 am

Nice work! But pick one film response setting and stick to it :P Seeing 20 *slightly* differing versions of the same image takes away the impact of it.

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Re: Visualisation

Post by PureSpider » Wed May 25, 2011 5:52 am

StompinTom wrote:Seeing 20 *slightly* differing versions of the same image
neo0. style! :lol:

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Re: Visualisation

Post by FakeShamus » Wed May 25, 2011 9:06 am

yeah, I think you nailed it on "Foto1"
looks really good!

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Re: Visualisation

Post by Pibuz » Sat May 28, 2011 12:53 am

Yep, thirty images puzzle a little :lol:

I agree with FakeShamus: the first one is pretty good. Excellent camera point, perhaps could be good to se the base of the table legs.

Also, a little more work on the fruit basket wouldn't hurt. Just to be picky, your wall bases lack skirting (you must be one of dcm's acolytes :wink: ), and basically the left portion of the image needs some more detailing according to me (some random objects, neon light points...).

The exterior backplate is good, but a little lowres in my opinion, can you change that?

In the end, maybe you should let it cook a little longer to be good gallery material. 8)

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