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hstokholm
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by hstokholm » Sat Jan 06, 2007 11:42 am
Hi there...
I have started thinking about what to do for the indigo competition, and like usual I had no ideas, so I just started modeling the first toy I could find in the house
EDIT:
new render
This is just a quicky, but you get the idea... A more clean version will come tomorrow... I don't know why the metal in the wheels turned black, but I will investigate that later...
good night from here...
Heine
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hstokholm
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by hstokholm » Sun Jan 07, 2007 2:50 am
just a 5 minutes render....
still figuring out where i'm going with this... maybe some cowboys vs indians ..?
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jansan
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by jansan » Sun Jan 07, 2007 5:27 am
THE Competition RULES:
- You can only submit 1 image per user.
Be carefull to submit your image in it's final state as once
submitted, there is no way back
¿?
Or I am mistaken and if WIP can be sent?
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hstokholm
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by hstokholm » Sun Jan 07, 2007 5:32 am
These are just WIP's... I think he means the entry's posted in the Entry thread...
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by Behrendt » Sun Jan 07, 2007 5:33 am
This is a WIP Forum mate
You can only submit 1 Final Image and those aren't Finals I guess

edit:
too slow

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surreal
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by surreal » Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:39 am
Murder by Brio.. how morbidly fascinationg! haha it's looking good man

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hstokholm
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by hstokholm » Sun Jan 07, 2007 12:48 pm
thanks for the reply
This is just a render that has cooked a little longer...
there are some normals errors, but they should be easy to fix... and the men appears to be floating
4 hours to work, so goodnight from here...
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BZ Win
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by BZ Win » Sun Jan 07, 2007 1:37 pm
Tie him to the track

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hstokholm
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by hstokholm » Sat Jan 13, 2007 1:04 pm
BZ Win wrote:Tie him to the track

exactly
Just a small update... haven't had much time to play with it...
I have made the rails lighter since this render...
Heine
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by manitwo » Sat Jan 13, 2007 1:27 pm
this is much better! better colors, better dof, better ... simply better

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by Xman » Sat Jan 13, 2007 1:54 pm
first picture, is the Render of art

Intel i7-920,RAM 3G ,GeForce 9800GTX+.
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by CTZn » Sat Jan 13, 2007 2:47 pm
hstokholm wrote:BZ Win wrote:Tie him to the track

exactly


how sadistic !
Would be cool to see some more features or props on the floor, walls or something, like a current plug or some others toys or... you see what I mean ? not much but just to give more credit to the composition

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hstokholm
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by hstokholm » Mon Jan 15, 2007 1:47 am
Thanks guys
I will be putting some more stuff in the background... maybe some a lego train station or something like that... There will probably go some time before I post updates.. I have to make a science project about navier stokes equations and I am not quit sure how to handle that
But enough of my whining about school.. Thanks for your suggestions and bye from here...
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hstokholm
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by hstokholm » Wed Jan 24, 2007 4:19 am
Again a small update:

I am trying to build a brio trainstation if you can't tell what it is
I have fixed the problems at the bench, and the tape going through the ground

and i'm rerendering the image now... But if you have more suggestions please don't afraid to say
EDIT:
New image that fixes most of the problem mentioned... But the tape still looks funky

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by tungee » Thu Jan 25, 2007 6:38 am
looks very good.
i like playmobils!
hstokholm from denmark?
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