what's it actually? xD
That's a combination of bump and exponent map, right?
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Hi Stromberg! Not so bad at all, I'd say!
The best thing is the wooden wall, in my opinion: very realistic!
Then, I think that the scene lacks a little detailing, like better floor, some objects on the coffee table, better modeling and texturing on the books (the red, white and blue objects on the shelf under the windows: I guess they're books, aren't they?).
Maybe a good texturing for the armchair, and I STRONGLY suggest an additional light source.
I think you have a really good start here, though! Keep experiencing!
The best thing is the wooden wall, in my opinion: very realistic!
Then, I think that the scene lacks a little detailing, like better floor, some objects on the coffee table, better modeling and texturing on the books (the red, white and blue objects on the shelf under the windows: I guess they're books, aren't they?).
Maybe a good texturing for the armchair, and I STRONGLY suggest an additional light source.
I think you have a really good start here, though! Keep experiencing!
New update.
Not done much more since i have had little time the last 2 days.
This is a realy noisy render with some firefly's cause for some reason i switched to PT with BiDir, after that i switced to hybrid mode so i will that for the next render.
Going to add a additional light source, i hues a lamp, just need to find one i can make first that will fit nicly in the room
And again, please comment i need it
Not done much more since i have had little time the last 2 days.
This is a realy noisy render with some firefly's cause for some reason i switched to PT with BiDir, after that i switced to hybrid mode so i will that for the next render.
Going to add a additional light source, i hues a lamp, just need to find one i can make first that will fit nicly in the room
And again, please comment i need it
I had a similar ff issue once when a specular material was intersecting with another material (big squares), I hope this is it. Make sure that geometries are not intersecting, specially transparent objects ! Actually they should all have a minimal distances above 0.1mm between each other. Check also precedences for the vase, just in case...
The couch is crying for more work but the rest is becoming pretty attractive imo.
The couch is crying for more work but the rest is becoming pretty attractive imo.
HI
Looks nice, some suggestions
- wood wall looks plastic, it looked better in the first picture.
-The big seam on the wood texture on the wall
-LCD tv screens arent as shiny as yours
-UV mapping on the coffee table could be improved so that the wood grain is running vertical with the legs, and that the legs are seperate pieces. Unless the picture your working off is like that.
-Theres two of the same magazines, and the magazines under the tv are sitting exactly the same as the ones on the table (move the around so they look different)
-needs some more anti aliasing (how is this fixed in indigo?)
-the 3 books on the shelf are hovering
-how about some cables to the tv?
good luck
Looks nice, some suggestions
- wood wall looks plastic, it looked better in the first picture.
-The big seam on the wood texture on the wall
-LCD tv screens arent as shiny as yours
-UV mapping on the coffee table could be improved so that the wood grain is running vertical with the legs, and that the legs are seperate pieces. Unless the picture your working off is like that.
-Theres two of the same magazines, and the magazines under the tv are sitting exactly the same as the ones on the table (move the around so they look different)
-needs some more anti aliasing (how is this fixed in indigo?)
-the 3 books on the shelf are hovering
-how about some cables to the tv?
good luck
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