Render Book(Stromberg)

alex22 · Post by **alex22** » Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:09 pm

There is actually an indigo group in the steam network.
http://steamcommunity.com/groups/indigo ... er/members

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sun Mar 08, 2009 11:04 am

Alex: Thanks didnt know that

Well here is a update on the rim, please give some critis

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:12 am

Update!
It dosnt hurt you to write soemthing, because i know you are looking on it

I cant get any better in no one is telling me whats wrong

Kram1032 · Post by **Kram1032** » Mon Mar 09, 2009 8:18 am

well, we can't tell you what's wrong, if it's already perfect

Maybe the name of the tire-makers is missing on the side, though, with that rim, it might be hidden anyway.... also, dirt and scratches?

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:11 am

Well i take first part as you like the image

Yeah the names on the side should be there, i'l fix that asp... and i'l see if i can scratch up my rim some

Kram1032 · Post by **Kram1032** » Mon Mar 09, 2009 10:04 am

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Wed Mar 11, 2009 9:31 am

Done some more on the rim, did add some text, tweaked some materials, trying to render a "dirty" version now

Kram1032 · Post by **Kram1032** » Wed Mar 11, 2009 11:04 am

Develops really great!

CTZn · Post by **CTZn** » Wed Mar 11, 2009 4:56 pm

Hi Stromberg

Specifically I prefer the second render because of the left light, outlining the "dents".

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:29 am

Thanks for the comments

Well i can rendered it tomorrow maybe with the left light

Here is the "new" scene, think i may need to change the rim material back to chrome..
Tell me what you think

cpfresh · Post by **cpfresh** » Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:03 pm

hiya stromberg! i like your wheel project so far. it is making nice progress with every new image. i guess if i would do anything to your model it would be making the rim edge slimmer, maybe add some lug nuts, i'd make the disc only that shiny bright material on the edges that the caliper grabs, and lastly i'd beef up the caliper a little to grab more disc. you have this fat racing disc and the caliper appears to only grab a little edge of it (unless i just cant see clear enough.) i guess that about wraps it up for me. keep up the great work, i look forward to seeing more progress!

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:57 am

Thanks for the comment, well i have done some more on it.. a very small update, made the rim edge slimmer, and the caliper a bit more beefy

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:44 pm

New render

It's not very good, but it's something, please comment

CTZn · Post by **CTZn** » Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:53 pm

nice move, I like it !

Stromberg · Post by **Stromberg** » Sun Mar 22, 2009 1:20 am

Glad you like it CTZn

Here is a cleaner version, no post-pro.
Please comment