Crown hall by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe- Indigo competition

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Re: Crown hall by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe- Indigo competiti

Post by Stinkie » Tue Aug 31, 2010 2:05 am

Coming along nicely!

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Re: Crown hall by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe- Indigo competiti

Post by zeitmeister » Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:23 am

Agree with Pibuz!
But I'm not very with the camera perspective; imho it could show a little bit more sky instead of unspectacular walkway...

but this comes really out nice, man!
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Re: Crown hall by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe- Indigo competiti

Post by hcpiter » Wed Sep 01, 2010 2:47 am

Thanks a lot for help :) ! Ive got this same things like you guys and I made another final view in cam02 sunet style but with more sky and less concreete.


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Re: Crown hall by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe- Indigo competiti

Post by |MM| » Wed Sep 01, 2010 2:53 am

I liked the previous righter shot far more.
Some minor post-pro would do good though.

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Re: Crown hall by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe- Indigo competiti

Post by Pibuz » Wed Sep 01, 2010 2:56 am

[quote="hcpiter"] Ive got this same things like you guys and I made another final view in cam02 sunet style but with more sky and less concrete.
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What about including MORE sky, allowing us to see the complete steel beam? :wink:

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Re: Crown hall by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe- Indigo competiti

Post by hcpiter » Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:07 am

eheheh problem is resolution 1000px 700px :p Ive done and send my entry to competition with this view if I win re-render this scene in bigger resolution with all steel beam and sky ;D

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Re: Crown hall by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe- Indigo competiti

Post by |MM| » Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:14 am

I can remove them right away if you don't like.
It's just because I've got nothing to do.

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Re: Crown hall by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe- Indigo competiti

Post by hcpiter » Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:29 am

Really nice |MM| pls dont remove :) I like this style but for indigo competition I`d like show what indigo can do without postpro so I use photoshop just for little more sharpen glow etc.
here some postpro in my style

thanks :)
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