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Doug Armand

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by Doug Armand » Sat Jan 23, 2010 9:55 pm
Just a play on the dieting concept.
Thought I'd try and set it up as a fine food shot.
Not sure I'm co mpletely happy with the lighting but overall I think it's achieving the look I'm after
All modelling, lighting,etc by me

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enricocerica

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by enricocerica » Sat Jan 23, 2010 11:16 pm
I really like the idea, maybe some edge split on the kinife and the fork and someway bigger to well identify the pill.
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by Doug Armand » Sun Jan 24, 2010 2:22 am
OK updated it and this is probably the final version - fixed uneven lighting on fork and tweaked the sizes of some of the elements, the pill was big enough for a horse to take!

, and added 10mg text to pill ( which at this low res you can barely see).
Also flipped the knife as good table laying etiquette says the knife blade should be facing the plate

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by Meelis » Tue Jan 26, 2010 1:48 am
Nice lighting.
I like the 1st more contrasty version.

Where u inspired by the movie "Requiem For A Dream" (2000)
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by Doug Armand » Tue Jan 26, 2010 1:54 am
Meelis wrote:Nice lighting.

Where u inspired by the movie "Requiem For A Dream" (2000)
Thanks
No I haven't seen it but now thatr you've mentioned I'll check it out

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by fenerolina » Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:42 am
Doug Armand wrote:No I haven't seen it but now thatr you've mentioned I'll check it out
You have to see all darren aronofski films!

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by Polinalkrimizei » Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:20 am
nice and quite unusual look for indigo output. Refreshing! But I also like the fist one better, the plate on the second one appears almost white on my screen.
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by Doug Armand » Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:19 pm
Polinalkrimizei wrote:nice and quite unusual look for indigo output. Refreshing! But I also like the fist one better, the plate on the second one appears almost white on my screen.
While I agree that the first one has better contrast I would suggest that if in the 2nd the plate looks almost white you should calibrate your screen?.
Check out here if your screen is calibrated:
http://home.comcast.net/~morrised2006/tips/monitor.htm
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