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								by Rafaello » Sun Dec 20, 2009 4:07 pm
			
			
			
			
			Hope you like it, this took 2 and a half hours, but still rendering.
Crits are welcome
							
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								by dakiru » Sun Dec 20, 2009 4:16 pm
			
			
			
			
			The sax is great. Did you model it?  

 
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by Rafaello » Sun Dec 20, 2009 4:52 pm
			
			
			
			
			Hi dakiru, no I didn't, found it in the net
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by dakiru » Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:02 pm
			
			
			
			
			Rafaello wrote:Hi dakiru, no I didn't, found it in the net
Nevertheless the render is great.  

  The only crit is the hat - seems to be a lot less realistic than the sax. And the difference in saturation between the environment and models. Plus DOF would score here.
 
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by Jambert » Mon Dec 21, 2009 4:34 am
			
			
			
			
			It's nice, I agree with Dakiru, +1 for DOF
You should blend your material to get something a bit older, it looks too clean for a street  

 
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by Rafaello » Mon Dec 21, 2009 6:38 am
			
			
			
			
			Thanks guys, will implement your sugestions
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by Meelis » Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:07 am
			
			
			
			
			Looks like new saxophone. But if u want a bit older look then brass should have black oxide.
But not that old, just a slight variation.
 
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by Rafaello » Tue Dec 22, 2009 4:03 am
			
			
			
			
			Thanks Meelis I've been working on it, but had a problem with the computer.
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
	
	
	
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