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Schosch

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by Schosch » Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:28 pm
This is an interior scene I am currently working on.
There still is some noise visible in certain areas because I only let it render for about two or three hours.
Criticism is welcome!

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Stinkie

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by Stinkie » Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:30 am
I quite like it, but you gotta lose that sofa.
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Jambert

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by Jambert » Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:19 am
Stinkie wrote:I quite like it, but you gotta lose that sofa.
Yes, there is too much bump on sofa. But the render is realy good

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Nick
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by Nick » Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:37 am
Yeah, less bump on sofa...and i think che lamp color is too similar to the walls!
Bute i like it, congratulation

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Pibuz

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by Pibuz » Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:56 am
Great scene Schosch!
I always like to see interior shots
I find that a more dramatic lighting would really help a lot here! Try to light up the lamp, and to make the light coming from the outside a little blueish! I see great potential here!
..perhaps adding a little more reflectivity to the floor...
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Schosch

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by Schosch » Thu Sep 03, 2009 5:09 am
Thanks for the tips everyone!
I'll post an update tomorrow.
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Schosch

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by Schosch » Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:28 pm
Here is the update as promised.
I changed the floor texture and the overall lighting.
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by Stromberg » Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:46 am
Love this scene, has such a nice feeling to it

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by Phr0stByte » Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:03 am
Bump in the sofa is still a little big - grain as well. Maybe try a cloth texture? The rest of the scene is real nice!
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