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Markus
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Post by Markus » Fri Feb 09, 2007 11:14 pm

the rendering time of the image is 1 hour, im still working on it







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Post by manitwo » Fri Feb 09, 2007 11:36 pm

the model and dof are great! but the overall saturation and brightness is something
you could work on. You probably could make a pinboard instead of that grey "floor".
Looking forward to your final pic :)
Keep it up!

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Re: my map

Post by Iqwar » Sat Feb 10, 2007 12:11 am

Nice, are you from Slovakia?

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Post by suvakas » Sat Feb 10, 2007 12:34 am

I like the idea, but the DOF is too strong. Looks a bit un-natural to me.
I'm also with manitwo about raising the overall exposure level.

Looks good otherwize!

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Post by Kram1032 » Sat Feb 10, 2007 3:17 am

I also think, the DoF is to strong... It looks a bit as if the upper part of the focused pin is from another image glued to this one, as the tip is already blurred too much.

But else, it's very well done.

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Post by Markus » Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:10 am

thank for all, i work on it, soon i put up the newest render,.....and yes im from slovakia:)

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Post by Iqwar » Sun Feb 11, 2007 11:15 pm

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Post by Markus » Wed Feb 14, 2007 1:28 am

this is how i change it :D

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Post by Kosmokrator » Wed Feb 14, 2007 1:37 am

yea..this time is just perfect! :wink:
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Post by Kram1032 » Wed Feb 14, 2007 3:20 am

Thats a 10000% improvemnet ;)
Very good!

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Post by Kram1032 » Wed Feb 14, 2007 3:20 am

That's a 10000% improvement ;)
Very good!
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Post by Markus » Wed Feb 14, 2007 11:34 pm

thanks for everyone and special thanks for TATO

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Post by Tato » Wed Feb 14, 2007 11:36 pm

hi hi :oops:

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Post by Kachu » Thu Feb 15, 2007 6:15 am

Fantastic, but DOF is a bit much but dosnt kill the scene like the first pic

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Post by Tato » Thu Feb 15, 2007 9:13 am

shallow DOF gives the sense of macro photo, imho 8)

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