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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:00 pm
by 8bstudio
Hi!
Here my 4 render (v.0.5):
time 16h with hdri
... more atmosphere, maybe! ... but how???

What do you think about?
Here another version with different hdri, v.0.5 and about 16h too.
I think they're too clean!
Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 9:00 pm
by manitwo
hi 8bstudio
nice
You could make your picture way better if you pick out another detail.
At the moment in each corner of your pic is an object, give your pic a
little space to breath.
Also they are all nearly at the same distance level - maybe put an object
closer to the camera
It's hard for me to explain in english exactly what i mean
so its easier to give you links
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Composition_(visual_arts)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Golden_cut
The links are not too informative but then you hopefully know what i'm talking about
But of course it's your picture - you're the master

Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 9:27 pm
by 8bstudio
Thanks MANITWO, very interesting!!
I think my images are too clean because the light is much diffuse, no shade zone and maybe hdri that I used are with white light.
In few hours I'll post another pic with another hdri....
We will see!!
Ciao.
Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 11:17 pm
by 8bstudio
Hi to all!

My last test with v0.6T5... I think that v0.6T5 is perfect...
Now it shall be very good SSS and alpha map.
Niiiiickkkkkkkkk!!!! Pleaseeeee!!!