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scene with coffee table

Post by wojtek-w » Tue Aug 02, 2011 4:30 am

hi,
another interior scene...
Sketchup 7 + indigo 2.6.1. Win32-bit
Comments are very welcome end appreciated.
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Post by Andy Andreev » Tue Aug 02, 2011 4:46 am

it looks great!!! but if the focus was on the table maybe it will be cooler just saying :)

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Post by galinette » Tue Aug 02, 2011 5:40 am

Focus looks great to me, but the sofa texture is too visibly repeated

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Re: scene with coffee table

Post by tar_gniK » Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:48 am

I would go easy on the DOF. It looks like the interior of a doll's house.

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Post by Headroom » Tue Aug 02, 2011 2:20 pm

tar_gniK wrote:I would go easy on the DOF. It looks like the interior of a doll's house.
I think the scale of the wood floor is factor 1.5-2 too large adding to that doll-house effect.

I personally would like to see more of that interesting coffee table ;-)

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Re: scene with coffee table

Post by wojtek-w » Tue Aug 02, 2011 7:32 pm

hi,
thanks for all comments.
Andy Andreev wrote:it looks great!!! but if the focus was on the table maybe it will be cooler just saying :)
the version with focus on the table was first (see below) but i like "blury table" version more - seems to be litlle bit more "photographical"
galinette wrote:Focus looks great to me, but the sofa texture is too visibly repeated
You're right. I didn't notice that myself, but I agree. Will fix this.
tar_gniK wrote:I would go easy on the DOF. It looks like the interior of a doll's house.
Hmm, I like it the way it is, but maybe You're right. I will try render this with higher apperture number ( here's 2.8 )
Headroom wrote:I think the scale of the wood floor is factor 1.5-2 too large adding to that doll-house effect.
You're right. I was sure I've set planks width to be about 12cm, but I've just checked - it's about 17,5cm. Silly me :oops:
Headroom wrote:I personally would like to see more of that interesting coffee table
It's IKEA. I'm not sure if this model is still on sale though.

anyway, thanks for all Your comments once again.

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Post by Andy Andreev » Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:17 pm

Still "photographic" or not i like very very much the second image :D

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Re: scene with coffee table

Post by lisa1809 » Sun Jan 20, 2019 12:57 am

Hello,

It looks amazing, but you could make some changes with the table like colour or you could take any other table like of glass. I have one Barcelona coffee table the table is amazing I can't describe its design but it is made of glass, I think that table would look more attractive. Just imagine, but your taste is also awesome.
Thank you!

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