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Interior

Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:28 pm
by Schosch
This is an interior scene I am currently working on.
There still is some noise visible in certain areas because I only let it render for about two or three hours.

Criticism is welcome! :)

Re: Interior

Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:30 am
by Stinkie
I quite like it, but you gotta lose that sofa.

Re: Interior

Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:19 am
by Jambert
Stinkie wrote:I quite like it, but you gotta lose that sofa.
Yes, there is too much bump on sofa. But the render is realy good :)

Re: Interior

Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:37 am
by Nick
Yeah, less bump on sofa...and i think che lamp color is too similar to the walls!

Bute i like it, congratulation :D

Re: Interior

Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:56 am
by Pibuz
Great scene Schosch!
I always like to see interior shots :D :D :D

I find that a more dramatic lighting would really help a lot here! Try to light up the lamp, and to make the light coming from the outside a little blueish! I see great potential here!

..perhaps adding a little more reflectivity to the floor...

Re: Interior

Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 5:09 am
by Schosch
Thanks for the tips everyone! :D
I'll post an update tomorrow.

Re: Interior

Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:28 pm
by Schosch
Here is the update as promised.
I changed the floor texture and the overall lighting.

Re: Interior

Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:46 am
by Stromberg
Love this scene, has such a nice feeling to it :)

Re: Interior

Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:03 am
by Phr0stByte
Bump in the sofa is still a little big - grain as well. Maybe try a cloth texture? The rest of the scene is real nice!