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my map

Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 11:14 pm
by Markus
the rendering time of the image is 1 hour, im still working on it







Image

Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 11:36 pm
by manitwo
the model and dof are great! but the overall saturation and brightness is something
you could work on. You probably could make a pinboard instead of that grey "floor".
Looking forward to your final pic :)
Keep it up!

Re: my map

Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 12:11 am
by Iqwar
Nice, are you from Slovakia?

Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 12:34 am
by suvakas
I like the idea, but the DOF is too strong. Looks a bit un-natural to me.
I'm also with manitwo about raising the overall exposure level.

Looks good otherwize!

Suvakas

Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 3:17 am
by Kram1032
I also think, the DoF is to strong... It looks a bit as if the upper part of the focused pin is from another image glued to this one, as the tip is already blurred too much.

But else, it's very well done.

Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:10 am
by Markus
thank for all, i work on it, soon i put up the newest render,.....and yes im from slovakia:)

PM

Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 11:15 pm
by Iqwar
Check your pm box plz...

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 1:28 am
by Markus
this is how i change it :D

Image

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 1:37 am
by Kosmokrator
yea..this time is just perfect! :wink:

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 3:20 am
by Kram1032
Thats a 10000% improvemnet ;)
Very good!

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 3:20 am
by Kram1032
That's a 10000% improvement ;)
Very good!

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 11:34 pm
by Markus
thanks for everyone and special thanks for TATO

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 11:36 pm
by Tato
hi hi :oops:

Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 6:15 am
by Kachu
Fantastic, but DOF is a bit much but dosnt kill the scene like the first pic

Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 9:13 am
by Tato
shallow DOF gives the sense of macro photo, imho 8)