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Competition - Go
Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:05 am
by SmartDen
I love IndiGO!
please, comment
Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:15 am
by CTZn
Harsh and straight:
Shadows are too dark, maybe dof is a bit too strong (maybe not); black beans look just plain black and can hardly be distinguished from their shadow. Beans are intersecting in the pot.
That was for crits, for comments well I like the idea

Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:26 am
by SmartDen
Uups... I send an old picture i lit this area light. Here is a newer one with Exr-lighting

Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:44 am
by suvakas
Looks good. Maby a bit too empty for my taste, but much better than the first one.
Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:55 am
by SmartDen
suvakas wrote:Looks good. Maby a bit too empty for my taste, but much better than the first one.
I found it a little bit empty too.

Any suggestions?
Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:58 am
by Maluminas
The white beans hurt my eyes

they are a bit too saturated. Otherwise its very good

Re:
Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 1:12 pm
by Moses
Perhaps change the camera angle with a shot of the beans and pot taking up most of the view. It may make it look a little less empty.
Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 12:11 am
by suvakas
Yes, i'm with Moses. Try to play with the pot and the camera angle.